A Critique of a Short Story " The Centipede" by Richelle Mae Galorio

Based on what I read. The centipede is a short story that publish on 1952 by Rony V. Diaz. This story for me is giving us moral value even though we commit some instances of insulting and hurt people around us. Its nice even some word I cant understand but still we can understand it. Then the flow of the story or scenario literally different from other. We know that we have a insecurities cant hide any longer but we think first before we do things to regret. If I rate the story in one to five, I will give it only four because there is an originality, gives people lesson learn to how give important to those people who always  there to rely on. The negative side that I can say is only the ending of the story is hanging, we don't know what happen after she fell down to the floor and no more dramatic happen to the  story but overall still nice story.  It can give effectiveness to those people who read that can adapt lesson or value that can everybody help to conduct or apply in ourselves.

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